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*rostered marshal - when someone needs to be an authorised marshal who is a current member (not an auxiliary marshal) | *rostered marshal - when someone needs to be an authorised marshal who is a current member (not an auxiliary marshal) | ||
*marshal - when any level of marshal will do - eg auxiliary marshal | *marshal - when any level of marshal will do - eg auxiliary marshal | ||
*Marshal-in-Charge - person responsible for a combat event - eg a practice, or a tournament, or pick up field | |||
*Society Marshal - not Society Earl Marshal. Marshal of the Society is also used. | *Society Marshal - not Society Earl Marshal. Marshal of the Society is also used. | ||
Revision as of 06:34, 29 November 2020
Acronyms
Avoid acronyms in the rules, they are a barrier to understanding. The SCA is a well-established concept so can be used, including as SCA Inc, SCA Ltd and SCANZ
- MIC = Marshal-in-Charge
- RMIC = Rapier Marshal-in-Charge
- RMIT = Rapier Marshal-in-Training
- EqMIC = Equestrian Marshal-in-Charge
- KEM = Kingdom Earl Marshal (or just Earl Marshal), not Kingdom Equestrian Marshal
- KRM = Kingdom Fencing Marshal
- KEO = Kingdom Equestrian Officer
- SRM = Deputy Society Marshal for Rapier
- SEO = Society Equestrian Officer (Deputy Society Marshal for Equestrian)
Roles and job titles
- rostered marshal - when someone needs to be an authorised marshal who is a current member (not an auxiliary marshal)
- marshal - when any level of marshal will do - eg auxiliary marshal
- Marshal-in-Charge - person responsible for a combat event - eg a practice, or a tournament, or pick up field
- Society Marshal - not Society Earl Marshal. Marshal of the Society is also used.
Avoid gendered language
We are a Society of very diverse people, so should avoid using gendered terms. Use the singular they.
- his or her = their
- he or she = they
- himself or herself = themself (use themselves for more than one person)
- him or her = them
- My Lord/My Lady, you are slain = Fighter, you are slain
Fractions and decimals
- Use fractions when using inches (the decimal numbers get weird)
- Use decimals for metric units.
- use plain text - don't uses special characters as it breaks the pdf generation
Plain English
To make your content easy to understand, use plain English:
- Use clear and straightforward language.
- Use the active voice.
- Use positive language wherever possible.
- Be direct and concise.
- Begin instructional headings with an active imperative verb.
Use these simple words to help make your content clear and easy to understand:
Use… | Not… |
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about | regarding in regard to in respect of relating to with reference to |
after | following on subsequent to |
agree | are in agreement |
ask | enquire |
because of | as a consequence of |
before | prior to |
by or from | on the basis of |
by or under | in accordance with pursuant |
changed or move | transition |
developing | the development of |
done | undertaken |
end or stop | discontinue terminate |
except for | with the exception of |
for | on behalf of |
help | assistance facilitate |
is | constitutes |
more | further |
most | the majority of |
question | enquiry |
so | accordingly |
start or begin | commence |
taking into account | with due regard to |
to | in order to |
try | attempt |
use | usage utilise employ |
Hyphenation
Hyphenate when two words need to be taken together to describe (modify) another word (noun). Hyphenate words that have to be taken together to make sense.
Hyphenate examples | Don’t hyphenate examples |
---|---|
sign-off tasks | The marshal will sign off the paperwork. |
Callum is the Marshal-in-Charge of the tourney | Find out who is the marshal in charge of this bout. |
easy-to-read document | The document is easy to read. |
re-sign (sign again) | resign (give up) |
this is the up-to-date version of the rules | The rules are up to date. |